I am a Year 4 student at Kereru Park Campus in Auckland, NZ. I am in Akomanga 3 and my teacher is Whaea Elikini. This is a place where I will share my learning. Please note that some of it will not be complete, it will be my first draft. Remember to be positive, thoughtful and helpful when you leave me a comment.
Hi Te Ariki my name is Liam I like your all about bunnies slide. The first slide of it was cute because of all the little bunny pictures. Next time you could add even more pictures to it.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Hi Te Ariki my name is Liam I like your all about bunnies slide. The first slide of it was cute because of all the little bunny pictures. Next time you could add even more pictures to it.
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